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I'm scared again,
and I'm just so alone
The pain is coming once again
I hide it so no one knows

a stabbing here, a numbness there
it never seems to cease
so often have i thought
and dreamed of sweet release

but I know that I can't leave behind
those to whom i owe this all
I must hold strong, keep my grip
i mustn't ever fall

It's nothing but their smiles,
the image of their face
their gentle laughter
that keeps me in my place
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nice work.

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I give my heart away freely to those I love.
If I gave my heart to you, would you do the same for me?
thanks! ^^

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"A gently scritch-scratching on a paper in the dark, the thousands of incomplete thoughts and emotions swirling their way through the tips of fingers onto the paper which serves as the therapist tonight.." ~Aiaki
Nice happy one :)

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.
amazing eh?

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"A gently scritch-scratching on a paper in the dark, the thousands of incomplete thoughts and emotions swirling their way through the tips of fingers onto the paper which serves as the therapist tonight.." ~Aiaki
indeed it is amazing :D

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.
It's amazing how the support of loved ones can fight off MS, or even give anybody strength in the face of adversity...Great poem.

I've featured this deviation in my campaign for Multiple Sclerosis Awareness - for more information, check out this news article: [link] . Thank you for sharing your MS-related art with the world.

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| =hoogathy | *Irish-Baby |
|*iPhotograph | ~Nature-Club | *canada-club |

i wanted water but i'll walk through the fire
if this is what it takes to take me even higher
Thank you so much for featuring me, as well as faving me.
Just a note though. I'm still unsure what it is that I have, though it is causing MS-like symptoms, I show no lesions on my brain. It's still possible it's fibromyalgia, Transverse Myelitis (Spinal Tap is next on the list of tests...) or any number of things. My sister however, has MS, and at the time this was written I was struggling with both her diagnosis, and my lack of one. This doesn't really affect the meaning of the poem, but I'd just like to clarify that :) I have a song that I still haven't finished called "Silver lining" (my sisters screenname since she was diagnosed.) that you'd probably like even better than this one. Maybe I'll put it up.
Thanks again, and thanks for raising awareness.

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"A gently scritch-scratching on a paper in the dark, the thousands of incomplete thoughts and emotions swirling their way through the tips of fingers onto the paper which serves as the therapist tonight.." ~Aiaki
Wow, I hope they get a firm diagnosis soon so they can start treatment quickly. Best of luck and health - I'll watch for that song as well.

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| =hoogathy | *Irish-Baby |
|*iPhotograph | ~Nature-Club | *canada-club |

i wanted water but i'll walk through the fire
if this is what it takes to take me even higher
Me too, and thanks.

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"A gently scritch-scratching on a paper in the dark, the thousands of incomplete thoughts and emotions swirling their way through the tips of fingers onto the paper which serves as the therapist tonight.." ~Aiaki

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